Wednesday, April 25, 2012

A River That's Time

Taking a break, catching hold of shore
Watching the time, watching its flow
Smiling at its speed, it's highs and lows
Dripping with the past, I'm sitting on my own

Some drops of time, they just don't dry
Some don't stay, how hard I try
Some soaked by eyes, get the dreams alive,
Some taste like memories, fill the cup of life!

Straights, bends, turns, splashing with the rocks,
Few whirls go deep, few waves get strong
Strait unknown, its traits unknown,
Its a fall or a sea, don't know where it goes....

My clothes are wet, I'm feeling the cold
Nothing do I feel, till I go with the flow
Smiling at its speed, its highs and lows,
Enjoying the ride, I am flowing along!

9 comments:

  1. Very Nice Abhishek. Keep up the rhythm :-)

    Its the flow of time that keeps life alive,
    The moment you stop, you will no longer survive,
    Among its highs and lows, life is a wonderful gift,
    So enjoy the journey as life keeps you adrift.

    :-)))))


    Dhiman

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    1. Thanks a lot Dhiman. I can see you are a pretty good writer. Picked up the rhythm just like that!! :)

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  2. ausum lines.. Keep it up..

    Its life.. high or low.. you have to go with the flow..
    Keep smile on your face.. so that you can win the race :)

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  3. gud one abhishek..........................
    ol d best 4 ur future:):):):)

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  4. Really a Good One Abhishek..Go with the flow.. :)

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  5. as always.. yet another piece.. yet another thought.. and yet another beautifully metaphorically composed one.. you can do nothing else but to relate to it.. nice work abhi!!!

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